Today, on the way to school, I saw something dark in the street. It looked like a shadow with no body. It seemed to follow me.
I saw the school, and then the shadow again. Suddenly, it was gone! I realized what it was, but I couldn't think of anything it could want with me.
It turns out it wanted to kill me!
Suddenly, the shadow jumped and scared me to death. Luckily, my mom used her ghostbusters suit to save me. Then we went to fight some bad guys, and we killed them.
I saw this creature in the light. It was a leprechaun. It was horrible! It had 40 eyes, 80 mouths, 100 feet, and five horrible ears! We killed him, too.
My mom and I make a great team. No one can stop us. No one! NO ONE! Do you want to try?
--by Felipe, Gabriel, Joni, Julia, Justyn, Kysa, Luana, Maria Jesus, Nacho, Natalia, Natalie, Santi, and Starla; grade 5
I love this kind of story! Great job! It flowed quite well considering the type of story it is - I'm impressed!
ReplyDeleteWow this is awesome!!!!
ReplyDelete